1)Children would be able to use this acronym to remind themselves that even though it does not seem like they are good at anything, in time they will find what they are truly great at and accomplish Greatness if they use "U.G.L.Y".
2)"U.G..L.Y" has been used in several occasions throughout my life to accomplish greatness, So what are you waiting for? Make "U.G.L.Y." your new motto and spread the word. I insist.
The first sentence misses the comma! You actually need a comma after the word 'that' because the word 'even though' starts a dependent clause. Also, 'in time' is another interject. You don't have a run on; you have a very wordy (overly dependent clause filled) sentence. You refer to the object twice (as 'this acronym' and as 'if they use UGLY), when you only need to use it once. Look for moments when you do that: insert the same 'thing' twice... Also, you have a pronoun agreement issue in which you shift from children to 'it.' Look at how I revised that to agree using 'they' to refer to the children...
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Children would be able to use U.G.L.Y. to remind themselves that, even though they may not feel like they are good at anything, in time, they will find what they can truly accomplish greatness.