Barrier Assignment

          People in society have these so called barriers that us in an uncomfortable situation that we are forced to be broken or act upon action. Today i will share a little bit of my history with my fellow classmates. Around the age of 14, i moved to a brandy new high school and i was overwhelmed. as any teenager in this situation, there was a lot of stress i had at the time to make new friends, being the new kid and not knowing anyone. Mr best friend: Edward, who i stayed in contract with had started smoking. One day, while we were playing football on a friday night. My friend offered me to smoke weed. At the begging i said no of course, but as most teenagers tend to fall into peer pressure, i eventually gave in and decided to try this new substance called weed. (NOT FINISHED)

Thesis Statement.

The quote from Naruto, and anime show “Growth occurs when one goes beyond one’s limits, realizing that is also part of training.”, Taught me to persevere though obstacles and continue when having a difficult time with them.

Christian's Editing Run Ons

1)Children would be able to use this acronym to remind themselves that even though it does not seem like they are good at anything, in time they will find what they are truly great at and accomplish Greatness if they use "U.G.L.Y".
2)"U.G..L.Y" has been used in several occasions throughout my life to accomplish greatness, So what are you waiting for? Make "U.G.L.Y." your new motto and spread the word. I insist.

9 Sentences

1)"When teenagers are growing up it is hard for them to shine because everyone is competing against each other whether it’s in math, English, or even in sports."(Before a coordinating conjunction joining two sentences)
2)"The mnemonic device that I came up with as an acronym is U.G.L.Y., It stands for Under Greatness Lies Yourself."(Introductory phrase)
3)" we knew we were a good team with chemistry"(Use with coordinate adjectives)
4)"Teenagers going through puberty and are not always confident of who they are, I want them to remember that everyone is great in some aspect or another using this device."(Adjective clause)
5)"The Device U.G.L.Y. is just a reminder to anyone that everyone is good at something even if you have not found that something yet, Some people are just lucky at an early age to find out what he are god at."(Appositive)
6)"The mnemonic device that I came up with as an acronym is U.G.L.Y., It stands for Under Greatness Lies Yourself."(Parenthetical expression)
7"U.LG.Y can be used with anyone, for example in when I use to playing with my soccer team at Sunday nights to compete against other teams we knew we were a good team with chemistry but always seem to be "Choke artists" when it came to the Win for fourth quarter."(Absolute phrase)
8)"When teenagers are growing up it is hard for them to shine because everyone is competing against each other whether it’s in math, English, or even in sports. "(Words expressing contrast)
9)" but always seem to be "Choke artists" when it came to the Win for fourth quarter. "(To set of a quotation or a direct address)

Mneomonic Device: U.G.LY=Under Greatness Lies Yourself

Christian Cubias

February 5, 2014

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Professor Ankney

                                                             Mnemonic Device

                   A mnemonic device is a device used to remember things. For, example P.E.M.D.A.S, this device is taught to toddlers in elementary school to know the Order of Operations, Parenthesis, Exponents, Multiplication, Division, Addition, and Subtraction. Now that we have gone over a mnemonic devices. The mnemonic device that I came up with is U.G.L.Y, It stands for Under Greatness Lies Yourself. The reason I wanted to come up with device is so that teenagers going through puberty and aren’t confident of who they are, I want them to remember that everyone is great in some aspect or another using this device.

              U.LG.Y can be used with anyone, for example in when i was playing with my soccer team at Sunday nights, we always went against other teams that were very competitive matches we knew we were a good team with chemistry but always seem to be "Choke artists" when it came to the Win for fourth quarter. seems like every time we had to go against another team that was giving us trouble we made more mistakes to lose the game. That's where U.G.LY came in and helped us win games because everyone in our team had a certain Position where he or she dominated.

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